The second photostudy. Took longer with this one, not sure if its because theres more face or more emotion… or because I was watching tv too… maybe all 3.
Again the eyes are a bit too high, but more importantly the face is very flat. This is especially noticeable around the eyes and mouth and pulls a lot of emotion and light out of the face. The shading needs be improved in these areas. Furthermore the shape of the eyes and the creases in the cheeks is slightly off and again pulling emotion out of the face.
It would seem the eyes are definitely an area requiring improvement.